golden skin
never fat
always thin
Never sold a poem
or a painting,
wouldn't even try it.
Knew hunger
and cold
knew pain
knew pain
and gold
Just an artist
Just an artist
as told.
Poetry and thoughts, many times darkened due the shadows of reality. I've published a book with love poems: https://www.amazon.com/Love-Compilation-selected-poetry-greatest/dp/B09WYVJQQ2 @soniacostacampos
How I would write it:
ReplyDelete~The Artist
Silver hair
golden skin
Never fat
always thin
Never sold a poem
nor painting,
Wouldn't even try.
Having know hunger, cold
having known pain
and gold
Just an artist
I was told.
Thanks Chris, I like your changes too :)
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